Hi my name is Jahnaia. I am 8 years old, I am turning 9 this year. My birthday is on May the 29th. There are 6 family members living at my house. My nan's name is Joanna, my Aunty's name is Bianca, my uncle's name is Alex, my sister's name is Shylah and my dog is called Tessa. My papa's name was Wene. I have 8 sisters and 7 brothers. My favourite hobby is to play on my laptop when I'm at home. I live in Ōtaki. My school is Waitohu. I do kapa haka in the hall with Matua Kahura and Whaea Kim. My favourite music is Billie Ilish. I love school because I love to learn. My teacher's name is Whaea Annie. My classroom is room 4
hello i think you did really well on this i wonder how you have 6 brothers and 7 sisters. I fell like you should of had more caps and more puncuacin.
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